All your haikus were great. I loved reading them. Here are my favorites, and the winners! I was looking for happy themes, personality, and most of all imagery.
Two runners-up:
By Caleb:
Sledding down steep hills
I wish I could play longer
But Dad says, “SHOVEL!”
I enjoyed the personality that shows through in this one — a kid’s perspective for sure! And it made me chuckle.
By Rita:
Pre dawn visitors
criss crossing fresh fallen snow
watching warily
This one got extra points for alliteration. I like how Rita doesn’t come out and say who or what the pre-dawn visitors are.
And the grand prize winner:
By Thelma:
Snowy diamonds gleam
At dawn, as fierce fire rises.
Beauty all divine.
Oh, the imagery here is just perfect! Lovely.
As I mentioned, I didn’t have prizes all picked out before I came up with the contest idea. This made me realize that perhaps I should buy neat stuff when I see it so that I have prizes to give out when I want to have a contest, because all of a sudden I had to come up with prizes! But I got a chance to get out this weekend, and since I love Burt’s Bees stuff, everyone is getting something from Burt’s Bees: soap, lotion, lip balm, and other stuff.
I’ll be contacting you three to get addresses. Congratulations, and again, thanks to all of you who submitted! I had a blast!
Rita
Feb 15, 2010 @ 11:47:50
Awww, thanks!
You are a great judge.
Martin
Feb 15, 2010 @ 12:57:47
Congratulations to the winners!
Heather
Feb 15, 2010 @ 17:02:34
Wow – all three are great, but that last one is really beautiful. Good job everyone! I missed the competition, but I’ll be watching for the next one.